(b) 6 (Pain/Longing) I Just Want To Close My Eyes Comments
I just want to close my eyes
And rest for a while
For my soul to break all the ties
Catch its breath and go the next mile
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T.O.>>>A beautiful piece of work, as expected from a talent such as you... The hits keep comin'.....FOR YOU! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{ F j R }
Oh, how I know that feeling! So touching, and painful - your words certainly touched my heart. You describe the feeling perfectly. Linda
A flow that creates a dreamy state for the reader.... well done.
A wonderfully dreamy write TO, the flow of this piece is echoes it's mood perfectly - lovely poem. Justine
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7/22/2025 11:11:27 PM # 1.0.0
That was a very touching poem. Good one...