Tuesday, January 9, 2007

(b) 5 (Pain/Longing) Goodbye....And Let The Wind Blow. Comments

Rating: 4.7

I longed to share, I longed to love
Wanted to keep you in my heart and above
But I couldnt bear to see it die
So darling, I must say goodbye
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Geoff Warden 21 January 2007

Wow this indeed is a power write, , , , , well done

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Catastrophe King 10 January 2007

And, I ask - why do you bring so much pain to yourself? ? ? ...... I shared that longing for love with you for quiet sometime now and thank you for those wonderful poetries which did keep your soul alive, but ours longing - just for more! !

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 09 January 2007

Poweful passion...Sadly beautiful....You & themes of love & romance are a good connection, young lady...Solid crafting all-around... ~ F. j. R. ~

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