Monday, December 4, 2006

(b) 4 (Pain/Longing) Wish You Had Let Me Comments

Rating: 4.1

Wish you had let me reach out...
Touch your lips and touch your soul
Help you wipe out all your doubts
By the sheer fire of love making us aglow
...
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 04 December 2006

Very passionate expression, young lady...as if i expected anything less... FJR

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Patricia Gale 04 December 2006

Beautiful, to reach out... if only they would see.... lovely

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Brittany Hill 04 December 2006

I love the poem and the way you put the words. Great Job

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Brian Dorn 04 December 2006

Wonderful thoughts and poetically fulfilling. Well done, TO! Brian

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