(b) 26 (Pain/Longing) Forever? Comments

I love the idea of someone touching you so much their presence never leaves you. Beautiful. Well done with you imagery, this poem is alive. ~Linley~

Yearing questions left by a moments touch, placed in the finest of poems.......

Love lost, but was it ever truly found, other than but for a segment of glinted passion? Great storyline here, & i agree with me lassir, tara'bout the profoundity of th' repetitious, subliminal seed-planting of the past tense...GONE.... & that looming, thwarting, question maark......To be continued, perhaps, T.O.? '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

In the context, and finely-penned it is, the past tense burns on the mind of the reader. And begs the question. A well-written, give-us-more piece. Aptly so. t x

beautiful images here.. i can sense a very strong yearning in these lines... Asma...

It's like the hearts agree but the minds do not want to admit it. Liked it :) Preets