Wednesday, January 10, 2007

(b) 25 (Pain/Longing) Like A Dead Body Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tired....
My mind, body and soul
Waves...Come upon me
And sweep out the mud
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Geoff Warden 11 January 2007

I would indeed add more but the two before me pretty much captured it, , , , This was indeed a mediforical majesty, , , , , , , , , well done, , , , , , , ,

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Catastrophe King 10 January 2007

YES! I do see some footprints..... but not on your body! I just remembered a famous couplet..... Lives of great men all remind us; they leave behind them footprints on the sands of time.....

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 10 January 2007

Image & metaphor are the diamonds* here, young lady...And you reach for utelise tem, so very well.... FJR

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