Tuesday, September 26, 2006

(b) 17 (Pain/Longing) Tranquil As The Sea Comments

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Tranquil
As the sea
Thats how I feel
Can you forget about me?
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Preeti - is here! 05 October 2006

Love the pace of this poem, glad i found a new poem by YOU! Preets

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Asma Bahrainwala 26 September 2006

a beautiful poem... it seems to wrk on two levels- exploring the inscape of the poet's mind (perhaps) n external (the nature) ... its a nice write T.O...i wudnt just want to take it in a literal sense... love... asma...

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 26 September 2006

TRANQUIL....NICE TRANQUIL, THAT IS NOW THAT WE HAVE ALREADY DISCUSSED THE OCEAN FROM YESTERDAY...LOL! VERY NICE WORK, HERE, T.O. ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Geoff Warden 26 September 2006

The furry of rivers flow to meet the ocean......Excellent rite T.O.

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Sridhar RVL 26 September 2006

agreed. Ocean can afford the tranquility. River has no choice. Nice flow and natural truth. Good one

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