Tranquil
As the sea
Thats how I feel
Can you forget about me?
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a beautiful poem... it seems to wrk on two levels- exploring the inscape of the poet's mind (perhaps) n external (the nature) ... its a nice write T.O...i wudnt just want to take it in a literal sense... love... asma...
TRANQUIL....NICE TRANQUIL, THAT IS NOW THAT WE HAVE ALREADY DISCUSSED THE OCEAN FROM YESTERDAY...LOL! VERY NICE WORK, HERE, T.O. ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
The furry of rivers flow to meet the ocean......Excellent rite T.O.
agreed. Ocean can afford the tranquility. River has no choice. Nice flow and natural truth. Good one
Love the pace of this poem, glad i found a new poem by YOU! Preets