(b) 1 (Pain/Longing) Where Did I Go Wrong Comments
My heart is numb...so is my mind
Lost the power of thought...its got entwined
Oh, Why did you walk into my life?
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Beautifully done, , , , , holds the charm yet weeps the pain an' in a wired way shows the shortness of time, , , , , , , , , , , I see no wrong in this poetic little rhyme just a poetess expression of mind........well done, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,
A charming couplet of romance never meant to be....I like this, T.O.... Thie Poem is as pure as your heart, my dear...Solid crafting... FJR
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7/21/2025 2:56:31 AM # 1.0.0
Where did YOU go wrong? You did not. Ask, Why did he go wrong? With, a heart so pure - anyone else Could he ever go? Ask US and we tell you. Whoever said you went wrong!