Wednesday, September 9, 2009

Aye Precious Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Aye precious time thy hold

Secrets many of yesters untold
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Mira Aur
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Jazib Kamalvi 24 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Mira. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Anand Madhukar 14 October 2009

A classical style well blended with some insightful thoughts and wonderful expressions. A perfect 10. May I invite you to grace my poetry section?

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 12 September 2009

Extraordinary and classical poem!

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Chitra - 12 September 2009

time and its effects...well written...welcome to PH

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Marieta Maglas 10 September 2009

Nice abstract poem.....touching..............10

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Obinna Eruchie 10 September 2009

A lovely dedication to time, Mira. Keep up the good work.

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Luwi Habte 10 September 2009

dear Mira this is so nice beginning nice poem, so exciting and cool luwi

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 10 September 2009

a very good start, it will be good if message is brought out short and clear, anyways this poem is good...

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