Axiom Of Life Comments
In my eyes of heart
In my heart of eyes
Magical moon had lit
Many stars smiled
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'soon my heart murmur'....so magical and excellent perfume of the Heart....thank you for sharing this lovely and loving smooth of line in the Hammocks of life.....God bless....a 10 +++++
stunning and touching...this was woven with a magical song and your lines has a very nice flow....great!
the poem is right in size... you have used 'easy to understand' words... you formed the poem with good organization... what can i say? well done...
'Heart is life and life is heart'-This is well expressed in the poem.
Smile smiled smilingly wonderful metaphorical poem, very well written, lovely rhymes 10
Finest play of words with blend of excellent theme… Ten Ms. Nivedita UK
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A different way of words, very unusual on life...interesting and excellent....thanks ..and thanks for your comments on my poems too