Friday, May 2, 2014

Awoke Comments

Rating: 4.5

What once was so perfect
Fell apart in front of our noses
We had no more choices
Both our powerful voices
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Jennifer Alejandra
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 09 May 2014

Your use of rhythm here is wonderful. Very vivid and deep poem

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