Wednesday, May 6, 2009

Awkward Letter To Mother Comments

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Mother,

I know not your name,
nor your smile, or voice.
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Pradnya P 06 December 2010

nice but too painful

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Shashendra Amalshan 08 June 2009

that is a lucky mom indeed.....beautiful composed mother's day card....i wish i ll get nice sweet father's day card from one of my sweet kid someday! ! ! lol guess there is no such day rite? ..anyway nice write...10+++ with lots of love shan

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Kat , sorrow 06 June 2009

This is a wonderful poem so much is put in to it, I could feel your pain just form reading thank you for sharing with us all. Kat, sorrow

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Me Myself And I... 05 June 2009

'and I've allways wanted to wish you a happy mother's day.' The words here are somthing you can alone can speak, I hope these words, can help you find peace, Another fine write.. MMI

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Rosalita Fernandez 31 May 2009

i hope you find closure to your many questions, well writen and strong well done for what im sure was a hard poem to write.

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how can one hate the woman who's brought them in the world? you made it clear that though you want to hate her for leaving, and never being there, you can't. there's always something in a child, that makes them attatched to their mother. this poem conveys alot of unanswered questions, and wonders.. ones a child should never have to think/feel. ones that someday will be in the open for you to feel the relief that i'm sure you deserve, and has longed for. thanks for sharing, +10

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