Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Awkward Dream Comments

Rating: 4.7

An awkward dream, I dreamt
We all had a beautiful tail
That revealed the truth
It amazed and marveled I
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Alexander Coppedge 15 September 2013

The intent nof this art is wonderful and mind capturing Yet the sway in the work needs to be address to bring out its fullness

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Heather Wilkins 12 July 2013

this is an awkward dream a good read

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Patricia Grantham 06 July 2013

The world of dreams can be very intrinsic sometimes. It is up to us to sort them out and put them in the right perspective. Good.

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Yasmin Khan 29 June 2013

A very weird dream with many symbols.

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Elena Sandu 26 June 2013

What a dream, haha loved it! .

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Wahab Abdul 25 June 2013

a tail in men nice dream and awakward dream...a fight against lies.. nice one.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 June 2013

Hmm as u say it was quirky, but d poem funtastic'. Perhaps springing frm d human embryo tails.

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