An awkward dream, I dreamt
We all had a beautiful tail
That revealed the truth
It amazed and marveled I
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The world of dreams can be very intrinsic sometimes. It is up to us to sort them out and put them in the right perspective. Good.
a tail in men nice dream and awakward dream...a fight against lies.. nice one.
Hmm as u say it was quirky, but d poem funtastic'. Perhaps springing frm d human embryo tails.
The intent nof this art is wonderful and mind capturing Yet the sway in the work needs to be address to bring out its fullness