Thursday, September 10, 2009

Awesomeness Of Autumn Comments

Rating: 4.4

Sweet Autumn heralds summer season's past,
She can't conceal the changing of her leaves
Autumnal days will hasten winter's blast
Her sunny days will ripen harvet sheaves.
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Yulissa Fregoso 28 October 2009

thats so cute i love the autum best time of the year

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Hanaa Art Nabil Rashed 10 October 2009

thank you for sharing me my special emotions towards such season autumn is so charming season. you succeed in drawing it romantically. after all it is a good time for trees to change its clothes and for us to change our hearts tooooooo.

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Patti Masterman 03 October 2009

Very musical, very rhythmic; Autumn has such a vivid personna in here. Starts off with a burst of energy and passion, and never slows down!

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Luwi Habte 23 September 2009

Dad, this is so nice exciting piece love your poetry luwi

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 22 September 2009

A fresh perception and vivid images of autumn shedding spring and summer greens.Your descrition of fall warms my heart.

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Fay Slimm 18 September 2009

I love this verse John from the title onwards - - it is a truly awesome time of transition - -and so glad you have reminded us of it's insurmountable beauty. Best wishes and 10 from Fay

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Susan Jarvis 11 September 2009

This is a truly magnificent pseudo-sonnet, with images worthy of The Romantics. I especially like 'Collages that no artist ever dreamed.' This poem makes the transition from Summer to Autumn a positive delight! S :)

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Beauty Philosophy 10 September 2009

A lovely poem celebrating the awesomeness of autumn even though I find this season very sad...the sky starts weeping...the trees start losing their leaves...etc...

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Sandra Fowler 10 September 2009

A beautiful lyric tribute to my favorite season of the year.I like what you see from your poetic window on the world. Warm regards, Sandra

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