Wednesday, September 17, 2008

Awe! Comments

Rating: 3.2

My full moon face, idol
Taking off her clothes bridal
Firstly two water lilies I saw
Later on a heart of stone
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Macy Anne 25 September 2008

small and proud, you wowed us all, thanks for your poem, now it's my time to go

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Tsira Goge 19 September 2008

That you feel to awe and respect before 'them, ' that only decorates your honour, it is very good/// Tsira

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Seema Chowdhury 17 September 2008

a nice one. small but wholesome.

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... ... 17 September 2008

Dreamy poem! I love it!

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Thad Wilk 17 September 2008

Ahh, short and sweet but says a lot, She's all that you have - ever sought! ! Best wishes Shiraz! 10 Friend Thad

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C T Heart 17 September 2008

a feeling of amazement to discover a gift...like a painting so beautifully expressed which only the gifted has an EYE for that. a 10 for you.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 September 2008

ha ha ha the 'Awe' is really a wow! of course +++10

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Lynda Robson 17 September 2008

A well written piece, I am always in awe of your poetry, you so so much in a few lines, 10 Lynda xx

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Anjali Sinha 17 September 2008

actually i laughed a lot while reading this nicely decribed deception. +10 for this short one regards anjali

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 September 2008

And too short, and nicely composed, and love it, and 10 for it.

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Koyel Mitra 17 September 2008

Heart is that matters all.Nice poem.

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