Away From You Comments

Wonderful Poem! ! ! A sweet, tender and passionated one! ! You have got such strong feelings, what is normal for a poet.And all the poetic language: 'skies grows a little dimmer, the candy I eat isn't as sweet, ' and the way you finish 'Even though we're far apart, I know we're closer at heart..' that's great! ! ! I love lyric poems.I do.Mainly nowdays, when love is 'such an old fashion word'(Mercury) , and people don't care so much about love just all the material things.But as Paul Maccartney used to sing: ''Cause I don't care too much for money, money can't buy me love.'