Thursday, May 26, 2005
Away From The Slimy Pit To Slide Comments
Rating: ★2.5
Each day
A challenge
We are sent
As to how we treat
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David Zvekic
26 May 2005
This poem starts like it wants to use iambic tetrameter up until 'That is of our creation'. After that point I dont know what is going on. the meter is too irregular.
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7/18/2025 6:24:30 PM # 1.0.0
Really like this - human insecurity challenged by human wisdom. Lots of questions. Feel I can identify with the sentiments written here. I really enjoyed 'Or shall we on the torrent ride oblivious to those outside' Brave even noble. Love it! BRAVO! MORE!