Away From My Reach Comments
Were you really in that much of a hurry
To leave me so alone,
So unkind and rude you could be
Deserting all our dreams and love aside?
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True. Love is deep inside. That is true love. You expressed it with all the feelings blended in the poem.
From the title I could guess the content! But on reading it, I got touched more by the sincerity of feeling and the free flow of emotions than by its poignancy! O’ my loving mysterious Lady – I still beckon you And remain always by your side Like a shadow I am stuck with you......... Most of us on poem hunter who read your poems affirm the verity of these lines!
a poignant write indeed - u have very beautifuly crafted each line that senses how much you miss you lady love - a fabulous write loved the below lines: To see you afresh and say Hello After cleaning the opacity Of my two poor tear-filled eyes! .........
Marvellous speculation. A beautiful love poem having thrilling expression that any one will like by heat. Thanks for such stunning poem.....10
Love such as this never dies even when the beloved is departed. The intense longing and desire to be with loved one envelops so fully as to be felt in dreams and expressed in poetic form. Beautiful poem Amitav! Thanks for sharing.
Amitava, you have reached within and touched the melodies of sadness with those of your own. Feeling your intense love and devotion to Rakhee weeping through each line, yet the beauty of your love remains well defined. Holding your heart filled with love for her and not receiving any back in return is very emotionally draining, yet in your dreams you find her in your imagination and take heart from those precious moments, seeing her again. These lines are so very poignant: You may leave me so early in a hurry, but I'm still dying for you. Love you and still hold you firmly within my arms though it may be imaginary nowadays! Totally tender feelings of your love expressed so wonderfully poetical in this poem, Amitava, I am sure there would be tears of joy in her eyes if she could read your love in these lines. Thank you Amitava for sharing your heart, RoseAnn
Thank you RoseAnn for appreciating this poem with your deep insight to it.
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7/27/2025 10:38:03 PM # 1.0.0
May your heart shine again. Heartfelt words. Thank you