Saturday, August 31, 2013

Away From Lively Fence Comments

Rating: 4.6

The cobra stood hooded and hissed
I didn't lift my one of the back leg,
Like a dog. I feared and then pissed
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Alexander Coppedge 15 September 2013

Beautiful art The work has spots in my opinion Thought not fully expressed or feelings held back It blurr the stated message Yet the intent of this art is unique and appreciated

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Sushil Kumar Tripathy 11 September 2013

Be free from concrete cage and will be really in a lively fence -A beautiful poem- From Sushil Kumar Tripathy, Sonepur, Odisha state, India

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Geetha Jayakumar 31 August 2013

Beautiful and meaningful write..If there really existed a lively fence...Just face the world, no choice left...Loved reading it.

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