Sunday, August 6, 2006

Away From Home Comments

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A flood of memories rise in my head
As i sit back
Pulling myself away from the computer chair
Glancing out from my cubicle thru the window
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Ashish Ram
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Rajaram Ramachandran 29 May 2007

What a home sick son this poem projects before us-a computer based poem well written.

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 17 April 2007

Gee, well, here I was thinking ok he says he cant write great poems? ! Not true at all! Really you have much talent and much to say...You held my interest from start to finish! I am so thankful someone introduced you to this site as I think you are probably a much better writer then you think... Keep writing from the heart.Look forward to reading more of your work very soon. =Shelley=

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Alfredo Jacques 22 December 2006

I really enjoyed this poem. great write.

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Preeti - is here! 14 August 2006

Ashish this is so sad, yet very well written, the comparision b/w cmputer and memories is very good. Preets

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Ashish Ram

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