Away, Away! Comments

A few powerful words that are well penned as well as spiritually touching! Going the right direction my dear friend! Keep it up and God Bless You! 10+++

Good work... I was looking forward to at least another stanza. I see the poem as an experiential, and it is not complete at the level of the subject's experience. Hey, may be its just a resolute will.. then it is fine. All the same, it is well versed

Heaven's will. good poem. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.