Sunday, October 22, 2017

Away And Back Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the night falls, the wind turns colder, the sky turns darker and the whole ground takes a different formation, while the silence takes its appearance in vivid picture.

The shadows leap out; the trees appear as distant as the branches come alive and the roots beneath the murky brown soil start walking.
The cold wind entangles you, to the core of your heart.
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Sochukwu Ivye 22 October 2017

Emotion-packed piece of poem. Crystalline lines given to Pathos. The poetess is at the peak of her prowess. You brighten my day yet again. Remain your noble self, Zi: 10+++

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