Monday, April 15, 2013

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the day you went away, my world slipped away, as if i were to roam the sky with a thousand butterflies, the moon tonight is clouded with the blackness that is when the sorrow turns into the upmost joy, thinking that the moon will carry it all away, all the pain for today.
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Timothy Long
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Captain Herbert Poetry 29 April 2014

Wonderful positivity in this poem. I like it Kindly comment on my poems. Thank you very much

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Timothy Long

Timothy Long

Auburn, New York
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