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Just how my heart feels now are your closing words... Since I first read this years ago now, I carried close to myself the third last stanza... not remembering which poem it came from... but knowing it was from your works... and now I discover it and read your poem afresh... enlivened with the joy of renewal... the dew of your golden pen inspiring, transporting... what skill you have... it is rare and beautiful and speaks of a heart of goodness and joy that uplifts and entrances... do keep writing as your spirit impels you to... this is not something anyone can teach... it comes from within...and it is pure excellence! tfs

What is this life if full of care, You have no time to stand and stare, Your poem made me forget all my cares....great work.

It was so nice Nikunj.... while reading, I actually could feel the journey as you have written it so nicely :)

in such idyllic environs, why not do away with the stereo?

The joy of being artfully presented. I like this one very much. Warm regards, Sandra

Hi! Thanks so much for commenting on my poem. Wow! I absolutely love this poem of yours! ! I actually felt like I was on that trip. Keep up the great work! I would rate it a 10, but for some reason it's not refreshing my votes.

a lovely image....thank you for the poem

oh what a nice poem i read from city walls down to woody hills sky lights and morning views reminds me of a scene 2 years ago.... as usual, your poems are nicely done the words are acceptable to any level of age it is therefore the prettiest among some coz everybody could understand and can easily comprehend...

You've painted the scenario with your words....very much enjoyable a poem....great10

You've painted the scenario with your words....very much enjoyable a poem....great10

Being a traveller & a lover of nature, you have nicely compossed this rhythmic poem.Nice reading

it must have been a wonderful trip i love the poem

I sense love in the morning breeze – what a refreshing feeling! ! !

YOU SEEMED TO HAVE TAKEN A BREAK IN THIS HOLIDAY...OUT OF YOUR MADDENING CROWDED CITY...YOU EXPRESS IT VERY WELL..THE LOVE FOR NATURE SHOWS UP WELL...EXCELLENT FLOW

All the scenes you mentioned here are really wonderful..i guess this comment won't be enuf for that..