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I feel the strong emotion flowing from this poem. Let it flow, let it flow, let it flow! Another10

I loved that poem. It was everything that I am not technically, and everything that I am emotionally. The pain and sadness flew from the poem.9/10

I was really drawn into your poem, but I really doubt that you just made it up. I just read this out of the blue, and by the end of the poem starting I started to feel drama, and tense inside. Then the writer must feel quite a lot for inspiration. Very touching, so you must be reaching out.

Many times in life we wish we could run, run far away or hide from the situations and problems that we face. But, these offer only momentary relief, for the memories remain and are easily triggered to mind through past associations with places, people and things. The only remedy is time and time in itself is not a permanent eraser, only a desensitizer that will ease the intensity of the emotions and make the memories come to mind less frequently. I feel for you my friend for love is such a beautiful thing while it lasts, but when destroyed love can become a poison that runs through your veins and pollutes the mind. And although you say you made this up maybe this will offer comfort to someone precisely in this situation. You’re quite creative if you pulled this out of thin air. The things I write come from the heart and from experience. So you one up(ped) me in that regard. Keep up the solid work. Feel free to read some of my poems: http: //www.poemhunter.com/matthew-de-gasperi/