Thursday, September 24, 2009

Away... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gazing out the white casement of mine,
I see the soothing blue sky filled with bubbly clouds,
I feel the cold breeze wafting the sensation of morning,
I hear the charming melody of violin played a distance away,
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Lily Law
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Anil Kumar Panda 11 November 2011

you must not be pessimistic.nice poem though.keep inking.

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nomad omnia 28 September 2009

This begins in light and white...right down to the Easter lilies...and then ends in blackness. Lulled into peace, then pulled into the nightmare. A riveting piece. N

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Jerry Hughes 25 September 2009

Ending this chapter? Good god I hope not, you're much too talented to allow yourself to get so maudiln Lily. Hugs, Jerry

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