Thursday, July 16, 2009

Away Comments

Rating: 5.0

A gentle breeze upon my face.
Take me from this wretched place.
Away so far I wish to go.
Where we end I care not know.
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Jasmine Wayne
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Mary Ali 20 July 2009

It's very smooth and harmonious. love it.10!

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Darlene Belcher 20 July 2009

A most beautiful poem... a perfect example of some sort of chance in love that we just can't turn from. I'm sure that special person is out there waiting ^.^

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Keith Hendrickson 17 July 2009

very nice flow. i liked it a lot. i cant wait to read more.

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