Monday, October 6, 2008

Away Comments

Rating: 5.0

It would be amazing to run away,
To not have to worry about one more day,
To feel the wind pushing against my skin,
To feel the tears fall down my cheek,
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Alice Winters
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Sathyanarayana M V S 13 October 2008

This is really very very good poignance every one feels in life......to run away from life. But where? Everywhere same people, same problems, , , , , , , Undoubtably a great poem.............10

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Ashley Ormon 06 October 2008

Yes, life gets hards, situations are tough. Running away would be nice. I think you have captured that well in your poem. I am not sure if this is a poem you have just written or if it has some meaning behind it, but don't run away. Your poems are needed.

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