Monday, June 25, 2007

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The world is a square,

with crayons and walls
and a shoesized window
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Melanie Emikohe
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William Jackson 02 January 2008

I know the feeling. Sometimes there is no escape from the 'rational world? ' Good write.

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Goldy Locks 27 June 2007

Know the feeling. Artists can relate. True artists, that is, such as yourself. One of the best woman poets on here- sincerely insightful. Whatever you bring to the table, all should read. take care, Sus

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Jade Leven 25 June 2007

I love this poem. Good work! It truly creates the feeling of claustriphobia (did I spell that right?) but then the release and freedom of your own mind.

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Melanie Emikohe

Melanie Emikohe

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