Awash With June. Comments

Nobody gets brown in june here fay, rust maybe laughs great write 10

i say. she gone and done it again. wonderful imagery my friend (In an Australian accent) . Fantastic poem.

Beautiful poem with nice imagery.10+++

I can smell the coconut sun tan oil and feel the ambience. Great presence of a short and significant poem. Hxx

Oustanding poem written, a whisper from a fairy...great imagery painted here...so lovely and soothing flow...10+++

This is a stunning write Fay...you have painted the picture so well for us...I feel like I was there with you...a welcome treat to read a new one of yours this morning...Fi 10++++