Sunday, March 4, 2018

Awareness Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was this lump one morning
Looked back at what have been
Compared to what should be
Picked up my pace took up
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Doris Cornago
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deborrahcornago 05 March 2018

As Bob Dylan advocates, And all that you've held sacred, falls down and does not mend Just remember that death is not the end...

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 March 2018

Doris, such a splendid work worthy of 10++++

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deborrahcornago 05 March 2018

Inspired by current events. True encounters make good poems. Thank you for affirmation :)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 March 2018

It's a fascinating piece of poetry! Spectacular schema....well structured, lucid flow of expression! This piece of poetry is highly commendable! I vote this poem with a 10

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deborrahcornago 05 March 2018

I am strengthened more by this kind response. Wouldn't miss this miracle for anything. Thank you. :)

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Doris Cornago 04 March 2018

Don't despair. I am currently in remission. Either by grace or some form of software glitch, depending on your perspective.: -)

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