Friday, September 7, 2012

Awareness Comments

Rating: 4.7

Black and blue,
The sky swells with indignation,
heavy clouds distended with groom
Which pulsate the involuntary
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Romeo Della Valle
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Hans Vr 17 September 2012

Tangible awareness swirled in a magnificent verses A perfect storm Excellent poetry

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 September 2012

Wow a splendid analogy there u draw btw d downpour n d human condition. Bravo 4 dis intrigue

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 11 September 2012

You have that great universal thinking. Beautiful soul.

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Suelynn Walters 09 September 2012

I love it! Great Job Here!

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Valerie Dohren 09 September 2012

Wow, a dramatic and thought provoking write. Enjoyed the read.

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 September 2012

Awareness should be the universal objective and i hope posterity reckons ur lines here when the questions arises to hit their morales with many entendres.I hope everyone of us achieve this viscosity of awareness for a better life to come in a better world

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Romeo Della Valle

Romeo Della Valle

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