Friday, May 8, 2009

Awaking From The Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

The stars are nothing...
mere flashes of light
like sparks flying from the fire.
The poor are dry wood...
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Afzal Shauq
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Elena Sandu 16 April 2010

Dry woods sometimes do hide incredible treasure' the silenced power: pacience..and so they live wait and try not to dream of diamonds because that's what one day they'll become..they will be other's diamonds.10

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Seema Joglekar 22 December 2009

This poem compels me to laud your efforts I presume this must all sound as fascinating in Pashto as it sounds in Translation. Wish I had read it in Pashto & derived the real pleasure. Don't you Worry, my friend, You have surely arrived.KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. [Do rectify the errors in translation -they do take away the true meaning.]

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