Awakening Goddess (Part 1) Comments

Stirring stuff.

excellent fantasy prose. very interested in part 2...

...seems you've let the genie out of the bottle Allie, keenly awaiting what follows

Alison... There is so much passion in this poem, you can feel it in every word Alison, i can`t wait for part two... sounds like the goddess has found love again and how...10

Etheral writing, could paint the pictures easily, like a film clip Great work here Love duncan X

Alison, awesome my friend. Your beautiful style always gets to me. I loved this and can not wait until part two tomorrow. Top marks from me, your friend from the top end of the planet. Thanks for sharing it. David