This exhaustion that befalls me, as all I can think of is her
Why did this invoking come, to such an emotion to occur
In a state of conflict, struggling from the heart to the mind
Wishing destiny to set me free, from a struggle so unkind
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Woa! This poem is so deep...it has alot of meaning to the world i'm living in today. I really like it even though it has a sad perspective and a yearning for something that is there but as far as it knows you are invisible. Gosh, I totally feel that way right now.
The wistfulness in this poem is captured with careful detail to imagery and subtle vocabulary. Great aabb... rhyming and excellent emotive depth! Loved this! Shaye