Tuesday, May 27, 2008

Awakening Depression Comments

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She crawls out slowly,
so slowly you don't see her coming,
From the very pit of your stomach
She makes herself at home inside you
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Mackenzie Scholte
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Jazib Kamalvi 27 March 2018

A nice poetic imagination, Mackenzie. You may like to read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Sonny Rainshine 27 May 2008

Good analogy of the serpent-like presence of dark moods and feelings. Also powerful image of the depression-monster feeding on thoughts. Vivid expression.

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