Friday, April 13, 2012

Awakening Comments

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A slumberous sense of seclusion
As sleep is drifting from my eyes,
I look upon the translucent shade of the morning dew
While I, moving slowly do arise.
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Hazel Connelly
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Dr Antony Theodore 07 January 2016

The suns light a smile of gold On the landscapes new days light, Now stand and look at the rainbow A gorgeous scene for mortal sight.. Wonderful description of nature which ends up in a meditation that leads to peace and serenity. thank you very much. tony

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Clarence Prince 30 May 2012

Now stand and look at the rainbow A gorgeous scene for mortal sight. It's just wonderful, Hazel!

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Valerie Dohren 17 April 2012

A lovely poem, full of imagery. You may like to read mine entitled Sunrise.

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Neela Nath Das 17 April 2012

Nice write! Wonderful nature poem.It sounds like a song.Awakening of the poet's soul and Nature as well.

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