Sunday, July 17, 2011

Awakening Comments

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Birds chirp, and monkeys chatter
Leaves rustle, and grass dances
As the wind sweeps across
To kiss the falling dewdrops
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Roseann Shawiak 01 April 2015

Amazing imagery and rhythm throughout this poem! . Love this line: 'each color speaks a language'. You have painted a beautiful landscape with your poetical words. Fantastic poem! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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