Sunday, August 17, 2014

Awakening Comments

Rating: 3.9

In the morning I rose
To the sound of the birds
Sat on the branches
Near my window sill
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Mary Forrester
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Jazib Kamalvi 19 May 2020

Such a nice poem, Mary Forrester. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Khairul Ahsan 05 March 2020

The poem is a beautiful imagery of the day that dawned! 'The chorus was grand The colours a mosaic' - a much too familia scene for me these days! I love restless, inquisitive bids.

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Hazel Durham 23 November 2014

A beautiful write with the splendour of nature coming alive with your words that flow with such ease!

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Noreen Carden 29 October 2014

You paint a lovely picture with your words. Really lovely poem

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