Saturday, November 21, 2009

Awakening(2) Comments

Rating: 3.2

Yesterday's memory beseiged
Thoughts realm in flowing spurts
Human inconsistencies' known joys
Without doubt augured as natural
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Kesav Easwaran 22 November 2009

When a man touches a female heart he touches it firm...female pride takes time to analyze the sincerity behind and once softness identified and accepted she wraps him up in whole...the truth wonders and complexities of man-woman relationship have been well portrayed in this good poem...the words pride and softness have been used as good poetic tools...thanks...10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 21 November 2009

amazing poem on awakening...bringing in a male and female aspect into it...truly lovely...goes into my favs

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