Awakening Comments

beautiful poem madam.. its true memories make us write something beautiful like this whenever we are in a reminiscent mood.. what awakes, when i pass... lovely use of refrain.. and it meant so much.. the rhythm was beautiful and the rhymes too.. regards prashant

Very thoughtful write. Inspirational too. Nice poem Enjoyed reading it

The beautiful moments, the innocent mischief, the raw creativity in whatever we used to do in the past are stored safely in that Safe of ours, only accessible to us whenever we need to take a peek down memory lane and relive the moment. At times you wonder; was I really like this? So smart! So good!

The walk down memory lane just makes us realise some things Just Happen! Nicely written.

nicely penned nostalgia.

Memories will always linger on us ma'm...how ever much we try to forget we will always live on those precious memories, but if you can forget those haunting bitter memories, yur life will be soo beautiful indeed....10++

Now the world is better, Now it will never shatter.

Awakening memories to matter a change..well said Deepti...and thanks for your comment

thoughtful! and inspirational.

Let this feeling of awakening, Happen with you and all of us everyday We will never grow old. We will just keep growing. Thank you for making me young. Nice one

I really like the flow of this poem and it surely is very thoughtful so it is a great poem.

A fresh poem giving the fragrance of happiness and joy.This kind of awakening is necessary to rekindle our hopes and expectations.We can not last long with the help of the ghosts of past we have to kill them.good job