Saturday, November 23, 2019

Awakening Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fresh iodic oysters in the air,
healthy looking tanned skin,
coquettish eyes, the burning sand
beneath our feet, and the continuous,
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 November 2019

A great poem! Your fourth stanza is my favorite....sparkling poetic expression...appreciated this brilliant composition...so elegantly constructed! Full marks

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Sandra Feldman 23 November 2019

I see this unforgettable and illustrious poem as " Poem of the Year" ! This is real poetry, with the seed of greatness flowering from very deep.

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Sandra Feldman 23 November 2019

" and the continuous, monotonic sound of the Sea " These verses, this first stanza embrace us beautifully, announce an extraordinary poem yet to come. The poem invades, takes hold, becomes vividly and beautifully alive. Unforgattable poem, of great, great quality and beauty. A miraculous poem of " love, splendor" and renaissance to hold close and repeatedly remember. An unending joy of exceptional poetic beauty!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 November 2019

A poem full of hope, dear Ma’am Mihaela. I love it.....10++

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