Wednesday, March 14, 2018

Awakening Comments

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Pull the sheet over my head;
and let me rest here.
I peeled my face off the mirror
and threw the crimson stone
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Lily Ives
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Lyn Paul 04 February 2020

A great write delicately expressing inner pain. Lovely to read your work Lily.

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Naila Rais 01 May 2018

A nice write... Keep it up... Read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too.. Naila

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 March 2018

First morning rays gently touch mind and body. Soul gets enlightenment. Self awakening is definitely and beautifully penned. An amazing sharing is dine...10

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