Sunday, December 18, 2016

Awakening Comments

Rating: 5.0

I scratched the surface, hoping to
find a doorway.

A moment, perhaps? A time, a location.
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Jeremy Horsford
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Dimitrios Galanis 29 December 2016

To be in conciousness of nothing is the first step towards understanding the point from which you can think of the creation of something.An excellent condition to start from.

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An inductive hopeful poem that powerful portrays how something conquers nothing.

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Ramona Gerry 25 December 2016

Beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing it with us!

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Jeremy Horsford 25 December 2016

Pleasure. What do you think it's about?

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Annette Aitken 22 December 2016

a well thought out poem, and out of nothingness becomes something, very enjoyable read. Annette

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Sister Frances 19 December 2016

You have written a poem that has words of emptiness and nothingness yet it is full of rich meaning. Very clever indeed :) Thanks for sharing.

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Jeremy Horsford 25 December 2016

Have you ever heard or read about obtaining something from nothing?

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