Saturday, November 7, 2009

Awakened Comments

Rating: 3.2

Beseiged by the memories of yesterdays
Flowing thoughts spin in realms of spurts
Of joys of knowing human inconsistencies
Now augured as natural without doubt
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 21 November 2009

THOSE TWO LINES AS KESAV SIR SAYS WILL STEAL ANY MAN'S HEART...A BEAUTIFUL POEM

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Vinod Ak 17 November 2009

splendid verses! analogous to the divine confluence of shiva & shakti!

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Vinod Ak 17 November 2009

splendid verses! analogous to the divine confluence of shiva & shakti!

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Kesav Easwaran 08 November 2009

'Softening the female pride through the softer understanding of the male who cares. Finally it is love that wins the spirit'.... This would appeal to any male's heart...and more to mine...for valid personal reasons... A nice poem sublime in its sentiments...sober soft and sweet in its telling...in tone...in its presentation...thanks for sharing your feels Mandara...10*

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Ronn Michael Salinas 07 November 2009

sensual. but pardon me if i don't really get this poem.

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