Wednesday, June 8, 2022

Awaken With Oneness Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the sun has gone deep
And the moon emerged on the horizon
A caller called me to follow in the wee hours of the night
Like a deer chasing the musk I followed unconditionally
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M. Asim Nehal
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Nabakishore Dash 10 June 2022

Awesome dear Dr Nehal.

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Beautiful poem, dear Asim ji.....Top score and to my favourite

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Life is not all about the rat race to run and win, rather it is about taking others with you as you go along the path. A philosophy, truth and action that i would like to follow in my life.

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A profound poem so well penned. Never run carelessly and aimlessly chasing mirages

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Anjandev Roy 08 June 2022

Wisely penned..... as usual....thank u, dear friend...

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Juhaina Tumlu 08 June 2022

Excellent poem and the last line is fabulous, The oneness in me got awake as I came out of my sleep.

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M. Asim Nehal

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