Sunday, November 16, 2008

Awaken My Heart Comments

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Awaken my heart~cool Autumn day
Colors fade~~
Aged leaves scatter away
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C.G. Lovelady
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*Trusting You* 20 November 2008

Calm of the earth as a season will fade~ A new dawn is heavenly made really good lines. I really like this one! ! ! great job! ! ! its the best one I have read all day. Crystal

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Ron Flowers 20 November 2008

Very nice. I hope to see more. Ron

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Chris Bradshaw 17 November 2008

It flows very well. Exceptional rhythm.

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Chinwendu Erondu 16 November 2008

Beautiful. Great holiday read! !

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