Wednesday, March 18, 2009

Awaked Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

The aroused day, feeling still
the unsatisfied of the early morning
shivers tormenting it, are blushing
are turning poppies red,
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Maria Barbara Korynt
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Dagmara Anna 31 March 2009

The fine use of metaphors, wonderful unique climate and 'pointa'.This poem is feeling firmly and long. It is worthwhile reading (exactly) . :) DA

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