Awake, O Man, Awake Comments

It is a good work. I think.

Yeah Lord Krishna [LK] terminated whole Yadu-Bansha when they’re in the high ebbs of ‘Falls’… Ego is powerful to annihilate more effectively than N. BOMB and we’re carrying in our bosom this N-Bomb to pave the path of quick annihilation…and the sign signaling Peace is Weeping 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

your words are so beautiful..it lingers here in my mind and heart.I love this

This is Krishan’s last peace plan Of self-annihilation save the clan. You write in such a manner and with such a conviction that these words become very inspiring...10+....Brishti

strong mythical and religious overtones....well written poetry good flow and nice diction cheers

Enjoyed this one...really good flow and a great message! Thanks, roshni.

awake, o man awake........really a maser piece of write......man yet not eat his fellow being......even though some where it was happening...........we should awake for a new seed of world.....otherwise destruction is always invite us with joy........

O man, still there is time, awake! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! He has been as sleep since his creation....Hope he will rise this time good poem

A very profound message embedded in this poem, as always, wisdom, facts and mythology interwined beautifully.

Great write! a thought provoking one! I always admire the social, moral & spiritual values embedded in your poems. once again you have excelled.

sir, a great write once again from you.... a poem which should be read by everyone.

A very beautiful write.... the words of Krishna come with a warning.. Interesting description about the karma have been talked about....I loved it.

I absolutly agree with you and the divine word. I am impressed the way the stanzas have been perfectly structured. A10 from me.

WOW! WHAT AN AMAZING PEACE.... GO ON! ! ! ! !

Ahhhhhhhhh....this is a marvellous piece, yes I did woke up to a stand still.Amazing Sharma!

The karmic theory has been well explained in the poem. For every action there is an opposite reaction, as the modern science also says.

From: Indira Babbellapati (India ;) To: C. P. Sharma Date Time: 2/28/2009 2: 25: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: Awake, O Man, Awake how well u've blend mythology and modern times, sir!

Sound advice in the final verse of this appealing poem - - thank you and 10

Man really is his own undoing. nicely written. it would have helped further if I knew the allusions.

this is real poetry good job good write