Friday, February 27, 2009

Awake, O Man, Awake Comments

Rating: 4.0

When I am on Polo Ground
Many a poem I have found
Friend Krishana there I meet
Him with a new query I greet.
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C. P. Sharma
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Luo Zhihai 13 June 2016

It is a good work. I think.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 April 2010

Yeah Lord Krishna [LK] terminated whole Yadu-Bansha when they’re in the high ebbs of ‘Falls’… Ego is powerful to annihilate more effectively than N. BOMB and we’re carrying in our bosom this N-Bomb to pave the path of quick annihilation…and the sign signaling Peace is Weeping 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Meggie Gultiano 16 October 2009

your words are so beautiful..it lingers here in my mind and heart.I love this

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Brishti Mazumdar 09 June 2009

This is Krishan’s last peace plan Of self-annihilation save the clan. You write in such a manner and with such a conviction that these words become very inspiring...10+....Brishti

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Saadat Tahir 22 May 2009

strong mythical and religious overtones....well written poetry good flow and nice diction cheers

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Roshni D'Souza 17 May 2009

Enjoyed this one...really good flow and a great message! Thanks, roshni.

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rago rago 14 May 2009

awake, o man awake........really a maser piece of write......man yet not eat his fellow being......even though some where it was happening...........we should awake for a new seed of world.....otherwise destruction is always invite us with joy........

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 25 April 2009

O man, still there is time, awake! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! He has been as sleep since his creation....Hope he will rise this time good poem

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Rani Turton 03 March 2009

A very profound message embedded in this poem, as always, wisdom, facts and mythology interwined beautifully.

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Deependra Kumar Jha 02 March 2009

Great write! a thought provoking one! I always admire the social, moral & spiritual values embedded in your poems. once again you have excelled.

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Vaibhav Pandey 02 March 2009

sir, a great write once again from you.... a poem which should be read by everyone.

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Cherry Sha 02 March 2009

A very beautiful write.... the words of Krishna come with a warning.. Interesting description about the karma have been talked about....I loved it.

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Sadiqullah Khan 02 March 2009

I absolutly agree with you and the divine word. I am impressed the way the stanzas have been perfectly structured. A10 from me.

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WOW! WHAT AN AMAZING PEACE.... GO ON! ! ! ! !

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 March 2009

Ahhhhhhhhh....this is a marvellous piece, yes I did woke up to a stand still.Amazing Sharma!

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 March 2009

The karmic theory has been well explained in the poem. For every action there is an opposite reaction, as the modern science also says.

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C. P. Sharma 01 March 2009

From: Indira Babbellapati (India ;) To: C. P. Sharma Date Time: 2/28/2009 2: 25: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: Awake, O Man, Awake how well u've blend mythology and modern times, sir!

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Fay Slimm 27 February 2009

Sound advice in the final verse of this appealing poem - - thank you and 10

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Eddie Roa 27 February 2009

Man really is his own undoing. nicely written. it would have helped further if I knew the allusions.

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Eyan Desir 27 February 2009

this is real poetry good job good write

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