Sunday, March 15, 2009

Awake, Maybe Comments

Rating: 5.0

As daybreak dawns
Frost upon the lawns
The cold begins to bite
Waking up not a pretty sight
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Gordon D Wilkinson
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Christine Kerr 12 June 2009

Funny at it; s best because I think everybody has probably experienced it at one time or another. Another great job 10++

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Eyan Desir 20 March 2009

good flow again good write

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Duh Huh 16 March 2009

Witty and an often accurate depiction of a hurried morning as it happened to me but if was a Saturday lol. Wonderfully written. Thank you.

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anurag duggal 15 March 2009

As daybreak dawns Frost upon the lawns The cold begins to bite Waking up not a pretty sight this is my fav part of the poem beautiful write indeed.....

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Gordon D Wilkinson

Gordon D Wilkinson

Oxford - England
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