Awake In Our Minds Poem by Doris Cornago

Awake In Our Minds



I'm
Looking
In retrospect
Life seems a speck
In the universe, gold dust
Scatters collecting in cisterns
Dreams are bottled in streams
Percolating amidst inconsistency
Caught in transition, evolving into
Better versions of ourselves, ages
Congealed in one precious moment
Swinging bridge extends interminably
Mourning losses, life is paused once
Then on it goes into a fancy whirligig
Repeating in billowing time patterns
We are exactly where we should be
The only constants in this formula
X and Y equals Z, see my fantasy
When tired, sound peters away
Night comes on winged feet
Darkness squelches the
Light but we're wide
Awake in our
Minds

Awake In Our Minds
Thursday, July 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: mind,rebirth,reconciliation,recovery from,revival
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We can never sleep. We can never die. We are gold dust in the universe awaiting our turn to be reborn. Keep awake, my friend and keep on writing poems as your legacy.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Doris Cornago 26 July 2018

“It’s almost gorgeously... mundane. It’s just, they were here and now they’re gone. There’s a moment where it’s just so matter-of-fact... That’s its sort of charm. It’s its beauty.” - Dr JB Miller on death

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